Bunshi Noukou Koutai

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai [Art of Molecular Density Shifting]

Appearance:



1st Form: The Molecular Density Manipulation form changes little on Shikou. When hardening his body, it hardly shows as if it does, it can range from a big, serious face and bulky muscles to sleek hair, skin, and the sound of metals clanging when projectiles hit him.

2nd Form: Another ability of Shikou's Bunshi Noukou Koutai power is that he can absorb the properties of any metal to his body to further increase his conditions. The color of his skin changes based on the color of the metal he is absorbing.

Ability: Bunshi Noukou Koutain is an ability that allows Shikou to manipulate his molecular density as in he can either harden his body or soften it as well as to absorb metal to his body. He can only change his density to materials he touched before. For example, if he never touched bronze, he cannot harden his body to bronze-like. He can harden it to withstand strong impacts and to deliver powerful blows or soften it so he can reduce the amount of pain he feels from attacks being inflicted upon him or to reduce the impact of attacks. As another ability, he can also absorb metals to his body in order to create a more metallic appareance.

Ascended Ability: The 2nd and advanced form of Bunshi Noukou Koutai would be Bunshi Shinarui Koutai. This power allows Shikou to fuse his body into other non-living objects or rocks in which he can reshape his body however he wants when he emerges. While he is rebuilding himself, Shikou can also take control of that object and make it as if it were living, sprouting limbs from that object and can walk as an ignored spy to avoid detection. He however, cannot shift himself above the object's size when he is fusing himself. Shikou can be killed when in this object and therefore it is very risky, especially when fusing with glass.

Techniques:

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Kori
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to harden his body to any material that he has touched.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to thirty posts or when Shikou is asleep/knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a three post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Nanka
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to soften his body to any material that he has touched.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to thirty posts or when Shikou is asleep/knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a three post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Sanmai
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to absorb any metal that he is touching into his body.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to forty posts or when Shikou is knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a five post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Few things but so far so good.

1. Technique Duration + Cooldown. For duration,we strictly measure duration on the number of posts not in hours or anything. So a duration + Cooldown should look like this. Example: Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 4 posts thats it.

2. You dont get your ascended ability until you have 200 posts, just FYI.

3. Your avatar is way too big. Scale it down to about 150x150 or at the most 170x170.

Just edit ur technique duration and cooldowns to follow the example given. Otherwise everything else looks good.

mhm... re-worded...

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Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Kori
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to harden his body to any material that he has touched.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to thirty posts or when Shikou is asleep/knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a three post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Nanka
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to soften his body to any material that he has touched.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to thirty posts or when Shikou is asleep/knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a three post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Name: Bunshi Noukou Koutai: Sanmai
Effect: This ability allows Shikou to absorb any metal that he is touching into his body.
Duration and/or Cooldown: This ability lasts up to forty posts or when Shikou is knocked out. In order for him to use it again, there is a five post interval or when he wakes up from being knocked out/sleeping.

Techniques cannot last anywhere near thirty to forty posts, thats absurd. If for non-battle rp scenarios you want your technique to last for extended amounts of time thats fine but put it under effect.

Also you are not suppose to word your Duration and cooldown you are just suppose to put post counts for them. Example: Duration=3 posts cooldown=5 posts nothing more.

And again your Avatar is too big please reduce to the size i specified previously.